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Let's suggest 86/ Taking it easy 32
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Hello dear Friends!

Another easy exercice that everyone can do!

Je sais que l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, même si elle est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...

Certains m’avaient dit être gênés d’exprimer des idées personnelles ( - ils avaient l’impression – souvent fausse – de les exprimer maladroitement. ) Vous savez que je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible.
De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !

Voici les questions auxquelles vous pourrez répondre :

1. For you, is it better to forgive, or to forget?

2. Have you ever stolen anything?

3. ‘Leaving is dying a little!’ Do you agree?

4. Can you ‘define’ adolescence in three words and define (or explain) them, please.


Vous pouvez répondre à 1 ou 2 questions au choix – en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu’à atteindre en tout un maximum d’environ 150 mots.

Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d’abord pendant deux jours) puis en vert… Une fois le premier texte corrigé au mieux, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc ! ) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !

Cet exercice sera pour vous un ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...

Cet exercice sera corrigé (j'espère !)le lundi 27 mai ! Go for it! with THE FORCE.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 86/ Taking it easy 32 de E)
Hello!

Our first ANSWER has arrived and is expecting your help!
ANSWER A: topic 2: please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you.

Question 2: No, I have never stolen voluntarly. I want to say that one time or two, it is possible that I forgot an article wich had hidden at the bottom of the caddy. I didn't see it, and the seller didn't see it either. When I put the thins in my car, I was sorry and d that the price was not high, but I didn't go back to declare it.
We have often speaked about this with the teacher and my friends. All of my friends took things voluntarly and they say that this is not to steal, it is just because the stores have too much money, take too much money and in a way, they steal us. The prices could less high, and more people buy them. I learn economy at school and I think this is wrong, but my friends are right to do it if they can. 152 words.

for your help.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 86/ Taking it easy 32 de E)
Hello!

ANSWER A: topic 2: please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you.

Question 2: No, I have never stolen voluntarly. I want to say that one time or two, it is possible that I forgot an article wich had hidden at the bottom of the caddy. I didn't see it, and the seller didn't see it either. When I put the thins in my car, I was sorry and d that the price was not high, but I didn't go back to declare it.
We have often speaked about this with the teacher and my friends. All of my friends took things voluntarly and they say that this is not to steal, it is just because the stores have too much money, take too much money and in a way, they steal us. The prices could xx less high, and more people buy them. I learn economy at school and I think this is wrong, but my friends are right to do it if they can. 152 words.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 86/ Taking it easy 32 de E)
correction avec l'aide de Gerold THank you

Hello!

ANSWER A: topic 2: please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy to you.

Question 2: No, I have never stolen (voluntarily/ deliberately. I want to say that one time or two, it is possible that I forgot an article wich had hidden at the bottom of the (trolley . I didn't see it, and the (sale assistant didn't see it either. When I put the ( things/ the goods in my car, I was sorry and ( ed that the price was not high, but I didn't go back to ( report it.
We have often ( spoken about this with the teacher and my friends. All of my friends ( steal(voluntarily and they say that this is not (theft, it is just because the (store owners have too much money, take too much money and in a way, they steal the ( customers. The prices could be less high, and more people (would buy them easier. I learn economy at school and I think this is wrong, but my friends have the ( freedom to steal if they want...(to waste their futures ) 152 words.
1) L'argent n'appartient pas au magasin mais a ses proprietaires et actionnaires.
2) je ne pense pas que l'on puisse dire qu' ils ont le droit de voler. Le vol c'est une infraction penale punie de prison et d'amendes.(definie dans les articles 311-1 et 311-3 du code penal)

Desolee je n arrive pas a mettre la couleur ni les accents

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Réponse : Let's suggest 86/ Taking it easy 32 de E)
Hello!

ANSWER A: topic 2: thanks a lot to the two of you... Here are my indications...

Question 2: No, I have never stolen (voluntarily/ deliberately. I want to say that one time or two, it is possible that I forgot an article wich had hidden at the bottom of the (trolley . I didn't see it, and the (sale assistant didn't see it either. When I put the ( things/ the goods in my car, I was sorry and ( ed that the price was not high, but I didn't go back to ( report it.
We have often ( spoken about this with the teacher and my friends. All of my friends ( steal(voluntarily and they say that this is not (theft, it is just because the (store owners have too much money, take too much money and in a way, they steal the ( customers. The prices could be less high, and more people (would buy them easier. I learn economy at school and I think this is wrong, but my friends have the ( freedom to steal if they want...(to waste their futures ) 152 words.

Merci ! et Bravo.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 86/ Taking it easy 32 de E)
Hello again and again!


ANSWER A: topic 2: thanks a lot to the two of you... Here are my indications...

Question 2: No, I have never stolen (voluntarily/ deliberately. I want to say that one time or two, it is possible that, one time or two, I forgot an article wich which had was hidden at the bottom of the (trolley . I didn't see it, and the (saleS assistant didn't see it either. When I put the ( things/ the goods in my car, I was sorry and ( ed that the price was not high, but I didn't go back to ( report it.
We I? have often ( spoken about this with the teacher and my friends. All of my friends ( steal(voluntarily and they say that this is not (theft, it is just because the (store owners have too much money, take too much money and in a way, they steal money from the ( customers. The prices could be less high, and more people (would buy pay them easier/If the goods were cheaper, more people could buy them. I learn economy economics at school and I think this* stealing is wrong, but my friends have the ( freedom/are free to steal/to do so if they want...(to waste their futures ) 152 words.

* "This" is not clear, it could refer to the previous sentence.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 86/ Taking it easy 32 de E)
Hello dears,

ANSWER B: topic 2: please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks or sounds clumsy to you...

why would I steal anything? and what could I steal? I don't really know!
Without being a billionaire, I have enough money to buy what I need and what I like.
Even if I was hungry, I wouldn't even be able to steal an apple from the supermarket, I would get by with anything
honest job for a bit of food. By my experience I can say that there's always a need for labour somewhere; it is easy to find a job for several hours, even if it is only for sweeping the yard and cleaning bins. We don't need to steal anything.
Some people steal or take the train without paying just for the fun of it. That's not the kind of fun my family has, we weren't brought up that way.


Thanks for your help.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 86/ Taking it easy 32 de E)
Hello!

A good text!

why would I steal anything? and what could I steal? I don't really know!
Without being a billionaire, I have enough money to buy what I need and what I like.
Even if I was hungry, I wouldn't even be able to steal an apple from the supermarket, I would get by with anything (maybe something missing?) honest job for a bit of food. By my experience I can say that there's always a need for labour somewhere; it is easy to find a job for several hours, even if it is only for sweeping the yard and cleaning bins. We don't need to steal anything.
Some people steal or take the train without paying just for the fun of it. That's not the kind of fun my family has, we weren't brought up that way.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 86/ Taking it easy 32 de E)
hello voici ma correction Merci Gerold pour votre aide
ANSWERB TOPIC2

why would I steal anything? and what could I steal? I don't really know!
Without being a billionaire, I have enough money to buy what I need and what I like.
Even if I( were hungry, I wouldn't even be able to steal an apple from the supermarket, (I would manage by finding any honest job I could get, for at least a bit of food. By my experience I can say that there's always a need for labour somewhere; it is easy to find a job for several hours, even if it is only for sweeping the yard and cleaning bins. We don't need to steal anything.
Some people steal or take the train without paying just for the fun of it. That's not the kind of fun my family has, we weren't brought up that way.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 86/ Taking it easy 32 de E)
Hello, dear writers and correctors!

Je me suis encore une fois trompée de date…. Nous sommes lundi 26 et il n’y a pas de lundi 27, bien sûr ! Silly me !
Normalement, c’est la date en chiffres qui compte, mais je vais essayer de m’avancer un peu en corrigeant ANSWER A.

ANSWER A: topic 2: texte initial and my impressions.

Question 2: No, I have never stolen (voluntarly. I want to say that one time or two, it is possible that I forgot(1) an article (wich had hidden at the bottom of the (caddy. I didn't see it, and the (seller didn't see it either.Bien pour l’emploi de ‘not either’! When I put the (thins in my car, I was sorry and d that the price was not high, but I didn't go back to declare it.
We have often (speaked (Shame on you! ) about this with (the teacher and my friends. All of my friends (took il faut forcément l’antériorité du past perfect. )things (voluntarly and they (say (temps)that this (is not (to steal, it is just because the stores have too much money, take too much money and in a way, they (steal us. (The prices could XX verbe? less high, and more people XXXXX buy them. I learn (economy at school and I think this is wrong, but my friends are right to do it if they can. 152 words.


ANSWER A: topic 2: Gerold’s indications.

Question 2: No, I have never stolen voluntarly. I want to say that one time or two, it is possible that I forgot an article wich had hidden at the bottom of the caddy. I didn't see it, and the seller didn't see it either. When I put the thins in my car, I was sorry and d that the price was not high, but I didn't go back to declare it.
We have often speaked about this with the teacher and my friends. All of my friends took things voluntarly and they say that this is not to steal, it is just because the stores have too much money, take too much money and in a way, they steal us. The prices could xx less high, and more people XXXXX buy them. I learn economy at school and I think this is wrong, but my friends are right to do it if they can. 152 words.
Bonnes indications des fautes.

Magie’s corrections with Gerold’s help THank you

ANSWER A: topic 2: No, I have never stolen (voluntarily/ deliberately. I want to say that one time or two, it is possible that I forgot an article (wich had hidden at the bottom of the (trolley . I didn't see it, and the (sale assistant didn't see it either. When I put the ( things/ the goods OUI.in my car, I was sorry and ( ed that the price was not high, but I didn't go back to ( report it.
We have often ( spoken about this with (the teacher and my friends. All of my friends ( steal(voluntarily and they say that this is not (theft, it is just because the (store owners have too much money, take too much money and in a way, they steal the ( customers. The prices could be less high, and more people (would buy them (easier. (2)I learn economy at school and I think this is wrong, but my friends have the ( freedom to steal if they want...(This is a shocking sentence...)(to waste their futures[ Yes, if they're caught...]) 152 words.

[1)magie dit : L'argent n'appartient pas au magasin mais à ses propriétaires et actionnaires.
2) je ne pense pas que l'on puisse dire qu' ils ont le droit de voler. Le vol c'est une infraction penale punie de prison et d'amendes.(definie dans les articles 311-1 et 311-3 du code penal)
Bien sûr, tu as tout a fait raison, mais le droit de propriété n’est pas vraiment un concept très clair pour nos jeunes… sauf si leurs parents insistent vraiment. Certains vont même jusqu’à dire que leurs parents sont d’accord avec ces pratiques… J’ai toujours espéré que c’était pour se rendre importants auprès de leurs camarades… ]


ANSWER A: topic 2: thanks a lot to the two of you... Here are my indications...

Question 2: No, I have never stolen (voluntarily/ deliberately. I want to say that one time or two, it is possible that I forgot an article wich had hidden at the bottom of the (trolley . I didn't see it, and the (sale assistant didn't see it either. When I put the ( things/ the goods in my car, I was sorry and ( ed that the price was not high, but I didn't go back to ( report it.
We have often ( spoken about this with the teacher and my friends. All of my friends ( steal(voluntarily and they say that this is not (theft, it is just because the (store owners have too much money, take too much money and in a way, they steal the ( customers. The prices could be less high, and more people (would buy them easier. I learn economy at school and I think this is wrong, but my friends have the ( freedom to steal if they want...to waste their futures ) 152 words.

ANSWER A: topic 2: thanks a lot to the two of you... Here are Gerold's final indications...

Question 2: No, I have never stolen (voluntarily/ deliberately. I want to say that one time or two, it is possible that, one time or two, I forgot an article wich which had(had semble 'involontaire') was(semble volontaire...) hidden at the bottom of the (trolley . I didn't see it, and the (saleS assistant didn't see it either. When I put the ( things/ the goods in my car, I was sorry and ( ed that the price was not high, but I didn't go back to ( report it.
We I? have often ( spoken about this with the teacher and my friends. All of my friends ( steal(voluntarily and they say that this is not (theft, it is just because the (store owners have too much money, take too much money and in a way, they steal money from the ( customers. The prices could be less high, and more people (would buy pay them easier/If the goods were cheaper, more people could buy them. I learn economy eEconomics at school and I think this* stealing is wrong, but my friends have the ( freedom/are free to steal/to do so if they want...(to waste their futures ) 152 words.

* "This" is not clear, it could refer to the previous sentence.(I thought so first, but then, it would have been 'that'...)

- 'Une fois ou deux' : toutes les expressions toutes faites contenant ‘once’ ou ‘twice’ utilisent ces formes irrégulières…
Lien internet

Lien internet

- caddy est le mot utilisé en français... Sinon, utiliser 'trolley'(US) or (shopping) cart.
- store: US// shop GB
Cet exercice est bien corrigé. Bravo...
(1) et (2)J'aimerais vraiment que vous me trouviez une façon moins maladroite de dire la même chose...) Pleeeeeeaaaase


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ANSWER B: topic 2: initial text and my indications:

why would I steal anything? and what could I steal? I don't really know!
Without being a billionaire, I have enough money to buy what I need and what I like.
Even if I was hungry, I wouldn't even be able to steal an apple from the supermarket, I would get by with anything honest job for a bit of food. By my experience I can say that there's always a need for labour somewhere; it is easy to find a job for several hours, even if it is only for sweeping the yard and cleaning bins. We don't need to steal anything.
Some people steal or take the train without paying just for the fun of it. That's not the kind of fun my family has, we weren't brought up that way.

A good text! yes, a very good text!

why would I steal anything? and what could I steal? I don't really know!
Without being a billionaire, I have enough money to buy what I need and what I like.
Even if I was hungry, I wouldn't even be able to steal an apple from the supermarket, I would get by with anything (maybe something missing?) honest job for a bit of food. By my experience I can say that there's always a need for labour somewhere; it is easy to find a job for several hours, even if it is only for sweeping the yard and cleaning bins. We don't need to steal anything.
Some people steal or take the train without paying just for the fun of it. That's not the kind of fun my family has, we weren't brought up that way.
Bonnes corrections.

magie8's correction Merci Gerold pour votre aide
ANSWER B TOPIC2

why would I steal anything? and what could I steal? I don't really know!
Without being a billionaire, I have enough money to buy what I need and what I like.
Even if I( were hungry, I wouldn't even be able to steal an apple from the supermarket, (I would manage by finding any honest job I could get, for at least a bit of food.B By my experience I can say that there's always a need for labour somewhere; it is easy to find a job for several hours, even if it is only for sweeping the yard and cleaning bins. We don't need to steal anything.
Some people steal or take the train without paying just for the fun of it. That's not the kind of fun my family has, we weren't brought up that way.

- voir l'emplacement de 'really': Lien internet


Du bon travail, aussi bien de la part des rédacteurs que des correcteurs ! BRAVO ! Well done!

N'oubliez pas la possibilité d'éventuels extraits de Follow up Work! à vous !

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Réponse : Let's suggest 86/ Taking it easy 32 de E)
hello derniere correction mes suggestions THANK YOU ❤️
answerB
I don't really know = I really don't know
By my experience = On basis of my experience
For sweeping the yard and cleaning bins = Even if the work is unpleasant, it will still be better than stealing

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Réponse : Let's suggest 86/ Taking it easy 32 de E)
Hello Magie,

Thanks for your !

I don't really know = I really don't know OK
By my experience = On XXX basis of my experience/ on the basis of my experience (boff!) / based on my experience/ from my experience.
For sweeping the yard and cleaning bins = Even if the work is unpleasant, it will still be better than stealing
oui... je préfère le but exprimé clairement par l'infinitif. Il ne te trompera jamais. 'to sweep the yard and clean bins'.

again.

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Réponse : Let's suggest 86/ Taking it easy 32 de E)
hello dear here4u
OK! bien compris. Merci. bonne journee

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