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My presentation/aide
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Hello everyone,
I'm self study English.
I try to write in English.
This is my first article.
Please help me to correct my text.

I'm Phanat. I'm 22 years old, and I'm a business women. I'm a member of Atomy company. I have three brothers and two sisters. They are all married.
My father, Sophat, and my mother, Sorann. I'm married. My husband name's Vibol. He's lovely! My family really like him! I will try to write more in English.
Please give me advice or topic to write. Thank you all.

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Re: My presentation/aide from E)
Hello phanat

I'm self I study/learn English by myself.
I try to write in English.
This is my first article.
Please help me to correct my text.
I'm Phanat. I'm 22 years old, and I'm a business women. I'm a member of Atomy company. I have three brothers and two sisters. They are all married.
My father's name is, Sophat, and my mother's, Sorann. I'm married. My husband's name's Vibol. He's lovely!
My family really like usually likes (singular) in him! I will try to write more in English. Please give me advice or topics to write.
Thank you all.

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Re: My presentation/aide from E)
Hello Gerold,
Thank for your help.

I study English by myself.
I try to write in English.
I'm Phanat. I'm 22 years old, and I'm a business women. I'm a member of Atomy company. I have three brothers and two sisters. They are all married.
My father's name is, Sophat, and my mother's, Sorann. I'm married. My husband's name is Vibol. He's lovely!
My family usually likes him! I will try to write more in English. Please give me advice or topics to write.
Thank you Gerold!
Happy merry Christmas and happy new year!

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Re: My presentation/aide from E)
Hello Phanat

My family usually likes him!

My family likes him : usually "likes" in I
My family like (or likes) him : both are possible in

Happy new year!

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Re: My presentation/aide from E)
Hello Gerold,
My family likes him! Thank you!

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